The Monster Of The Awake Dead

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I walked into the Underground room and let out a big scream because I saw the awake dead my dad was telling me about "Then the monster puts the victims in an Underground room" he would always say to me "Now the monster only takes selfish humans who always want their stuff to themselves and they are to selfish to let anyone else have a chance of getting it......" Now I know that is true because the awake dead people" Who is dead and has their eyes open which is creepy" Anna thought. They have all their belongings with them. Then I see a shadow with things coming out of it and it is very big and has a big face and then I see what my dad said"Now the monster of the awake dead has a huge eye that he uses to scare people, he also has 12 arms with big angry dogs on them to guard the awake dead." So the dogs start barking and I run as fast as my 12 year old legs will carry me and I slam the door of the Underground room and climb up and out of the secret entrance and to dad.

Chapter 1

the story begins

The bus of Tammy Middle School stops at 3124 Green street Lane and I step off on the gravel driveway knowing and gonna tell my dad about my day at school. I then, as usual wave to the bus driver who then drives away. Then I turn the corner to look at the backyard and I look around. I look and see my dad but then I figure out that instead of doing his usual 3:00 session of mowing the yard........he is wiping his forehead and panting!

I run over and ask,"dad........w-what is going o-on?"

He replies but talked like an 8 year old boy who has mowed an 100 yard football field instead of our 10 foot yard "Anna I saw something that I never ever want you to ever see"

"W-What?"said Anna her curiosity taking over.

" I will tell you about it as your story tonight."

"YA-"

"but on one condition." her dad interrupted

"What is it dad?"she said

"No matter what I tell you, never try and find it."said the dad 

" OK"Anna said.
"By the way I had a great day at school! We had an awards ceremony and I got A honor roll!" 
"Wow that's great! Now go inside and do your homework. After dinner I'll tell you about it OK?"
"OK I can't wait!"

Chapter 2

That Night

That night when her dad usually read a book by her bed he was not there. Today is different and Anna new it because her dad was going to tell her about the "something" that he saw. Anna walked over to the recliner in front of the TV and next to the couch. But someone else was sitting beside her dad. Her friend Mary!

She asked Mary,"Why are you here?"

She said,"It is not like you are the only person who wants to know!"Then Anna spotted a weird girl who was picking her nose.

"Hi" she said.

"What is your name?" Anna said.

"Brittany" she said still picking her nose.

Mary was reading Harry Potter and the Half Blood Prince.

The dad cleared his throat and Mary stopped reading. Brittany stopped picking her nose. The dad started talking,

"Now the thing I saw this afternoon.... Stop picking your nose Brittany! OK so the thing I saw this afternoon was something called the monster of the awake dead....."

Anna interrupted,"What is the awake dead?"

"The awake dead are people who are dead but their eyes are open. Now then The monster of the awake dead scares his victims then they die."the dad said

"do they have a shocked look on her face?" said Mary.

"Yes" the dad said

"That's scary" said Brittany.

"Then the monster puts the victims in a underground room"the dad said

"Wow!"said Anna and Mary. Brittany was to busy picking her nose.

"Now the monster only takes selfish humans who always want there stuff to themselves

and they are selfish to let anyone else have it"explained the dad

"How does it alert itself for intruders?" Anna asked.

"His dogs start barking then he runs after the intruder." answered the dad

"How does he scare them with his eye?"Mary asked.

"Well the eye create a person's worst nightmare that is so scary it kills them but there eyes are open and when the underground room gets full he closes there eyes and they die...."

"OK I am out of here" Brittany said

"Anna time for bed and Mary please go back to your house." said the dad

"OK,bye Anna" said Mary

"Bye."said Anna and she walked to her bedroom.

Chapter 3

The next day

Anna woke up to her phone ringing.

" Hello?" Then Brittany was on her phone sounding scared and staggering for breath

"You-you know th-the thing your dad was talking a-about?"

"You mean the monster of the awake dead?"

"Yeah and I saw it walk by me toward the little house and apparently the guy in there was a rich greedy man who was hiding in the house well anyway I got as scared as your dad was, I nearly jumped out of my skin, I want to find him and destroy that maniac!"

"OK meet me at 6:00 in my room which is the first room upstairs. See you tonight."

"See you."
Anna went and got a shower and brushed her teeth and ate her pancakes. When she was done she got on her computer then called Mary.
"Hi Mary! Brittany called and she's coming over at 6:00 wanna come?"
"Sorry I have chores....we'll see ya later!"
"kk Bye Mary!"
"Bye!"

Chapter 4

At 6:00...........

Anna was in her bedroom when Brittany busted in as expected.

She said "Anna! Yay, So when are we going to start?"

"Right now, head over to the computer."

"OK"

At the computer Anna pulled up the notes she made of what her dad said. These are her notes:

It is called the monster of the awake dead

The awake dead are people who are dead but their eyes are open

The monster of the awake dead scares his victims then they die 

Then the monster puts his victims in an Underground room

The monster only takes selfish humans

It has dogs on its arms which he uses to guard the awake dead

The dogs bark when their is intruders

To create the awake dead he uses his eye and creates the worst fear and kills them but there eyes are open

"Sup guys" said Mary

" Mary what are you doing here?!?!"said Anna

"Just seeing what you guys are doing."replied Mary.

" OK you can stay. "offered Anna

" Yay! "yelled Mary

Mary climbed through the window.

When Anna finished explaining to Mary about what was going on, all 3 of them reread Anna's notes.

" Bo!" 

"Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!" yelled Anna, Mary, and Brittany then Anna hit randomly! Turned out she punched her dad in the stomach!!!!!!!

"Off!"His dad read Anna's notes and then asked....

"What is this ....... and why is it here!"the dad yelled shaking with fury

" Well...my mom is calling me, bye!"Brittany said leaving out of the window like she was in a rush.

But Mary stayed and Anna explained to her dad what had happened from 'The next day' to now.

"Well I am sorry Brittany had to see that and Anna nice notes I can tell you were listening. But do not be thinking about destroying it."

"OK" said Anna and Mary at the same time.

Then when he left Brittany came back.

"What did you do that for?!?!?!?!!" exclaimed Anna and Mary.

"Someone really called me."

"Oh." said Anna and Mary

"So shall we continue?"said Mary.

" Yeah!"said Brittany like a 2year old.

They all looked at the notes and Mary reached over to the computer and typed something in,

9) It has also been seen by dad and Brittany.

"That's good!" said Anna.

"Yeah so who wants to kick some monster butt?"said Brittany.

" WHAT ARE YOU CRAZY!!!!!!"yelled Anna and Mary.

"Why should your dad not want us to destroy the monster who scared him half to death?"

"I don't know but I will ask him"said Anna.

Chapter 5

Downstairs

Anna went down the stairs to her dad watching football and eating popcorn.

" Dad?"

"Yes! Touchdown!- Yes Anna?"

"Why do you not want us to destroy the monster who scared you half to death?"

"Well because I don't want want my daughter and her two friends to be part of the awake dead population."

"OK dad but-"

"No buts!"

"But......."

"Go to your room Anna!!!!"

Then when Anna was in her room.

"So?!" Mary and Brittany said like it was bothering them for years.

"He said 'Well because I don't want want my daughter and her two friends to be part of the awake dead population.'."

"That's not good enough!" said Brittany.

"So being dead is not good enough!!!!!"said Anna.

"I agree with both of you. I think we should kick monster butt but try and not die."said Mary.

"So should we look it up on Google?"offered Brittany

"Sure!"said Anna 

When they looked it up in google images all they saw was 1 big picture of the 12 dog, 1 big eye monster of the awake dead. They went to the web and saw a link called www.awakedeadlist.com. They scrolled down and the last two people where as listed below:

121) James Oltdado

That's her dad

122) Brittany Denver

The girl that is her friend. Brittany apparently was wondering about her name being on there and Anna was wondering about her dad's name being on there.

"It only happened yesterday!"said Brittany

"I don't want to have to deal with two problems, the monster, and two names on a list."said Mary.

"Well it does bother us! Right Anna?"said Brittany.

"Let me see......a little but I think the monster is more important so we will deal with the list after the monster is destroyed. Deal?"said Anna 

" Deal."said Mary and Brittany 

Then all 3 of them went to the still very mad dad.

"Anna's dad!!!"

"What." The dad muttered

Mary pushed Brittany in front of the dad.

"let me see...... ah OK so like we know the risks but could you give us a chance." Brittany said hesitantly.

"Brittany I know what you saw and I know you want to destroy it but I don't want you to kill yourself just because you were scared...."

"But it was not a one time thing. I can't even walk without knowing someone was touching me or else I seriously lose all thoughts and will find the nearest close relatives or friend and at least stand very close to them, I have even told my mom that I will either sleep at Anna's house or sleep in my dad's old bed and my mom is still thinking it over!"said Brittany starting to freak out.

" Well you can sleep here anytime you want but what about when no one is around?"the dad said all of a sudden sounding interested.

"Well that has never happened to me before...."she sounded not sure of herself " My mom and dad seem so close to me except at school but Anna or Mary is in all my classes."

Anna was starting to feel left out because her dad was talking to Brittany like he seemed interested. When Anna would talk to her dad the phone would always ring and he would leave her behind.

They were still talking "....and you have a mom right?"

"Dad?"said Anna talking like a baby to get her dads attention.

" Yes?"said dad answering her.

"Well why is not the phone ringing and why are you not leaving us here at the house with us still having stuff on our mind-"

Ring!

"Oh I have to answer that." the dad said hurrying.

"NO!" yelled Mary. "You will talk to your daughter like you are talking to Brittany!"

"Excuse me.."the dad said ignoring Mary and going to the phone.

" Yes Mr.Herfy.............Yes.........Oh I will be right there!.......Bye Mr.Herfy."the dad said in a rush. Then he turned to Anna and casually said "Sweetie I will see you soon I need to help my boss. Bye."

He left the 3 friends behind and Anna felt left out for the 20th time he left her behind. Mary was very angry for leaving Anna and Brittany felt safe because the dad made her feel like she was family.

"I CAN NOT BELIVE HE LEFT YOU BEHIND AGAIN!" said Mary kicking over a trash can.

"It is OK. I am used to it............" Anna said pitifully. "Besides we can work on the monster now." Anna said quickly changing the subject.

Then when they were all in Anna's room and all surrounding the computer. They decided to take a break.  

Chapter 6

Then when he came back

"Anna, Mary and Brittany you can defeat the monster."

"Really!!!!"they all exclaimed.

"Yes."said the dad

"Why?"wondered Brittany.

"Because everyone saw it 2 minutes ago. I went to www.awakedeadlist.com and saw everyone's name on it."said the dad

" Tell us everything you know so we defeat this and by we I mean the team Anna Oltdado,Mary Brisley, Brittany Denver, and James Oltdado."Anna said triumphantly 

"Don't you dare call your father by his real name!"shouted the dad

"Sorry I was in the zone"Anna sadly said

"It is OK, so were do we start-"

"Explain to us!"

"OK so when I was done talking with you about the monster I saw the TV act weird then a report was on and I could see it create the persons worst and it fell down. It did not stiffen up at all then the TV made a screaming noise. I forgot the rest because I fainted but when I got up I saw the TV as good as ever. I wondered what happened then I knew were the two guys were.......... they were part of the awake dead. I went up stairs and saw your notes so I got mad and when I was done getting mad you came in and asked about the monster. Still being terrified I said what I thought then you said but and I was so mad that I yelled and you continued to say it so I sent you to your room so then I could cool down. I was not done cooled down when all three of you came in and talked to me. Then the phone and I had to help my boss then when I was on my way back I saw the monster again so I thought enough was enough and I let you defeat it." The dad said.

"Thank you, now to the computer!"said Anna

The dad read the notes. Then someone finally talked,

"Well let us start this thing!"said Brittany 

"I think to destroy the monster you need firepower."said the dad

"What do you mean?" Brittany said 

The dad walked over to Anna's bookshelf and pulled out the really boring book about banking and it acted like a key and the bookshelf split in half like an elevator and they all saw the biggest variety of guns and bows they had ever seen!

"You can all choose 1"

Brittany choose a black pistol. Anna choose a dark red bow. Mary choose fast exploding bombs.

"Awesome!" Anna said

"Cool!" said Mary

"Nice!" said Brittany 

"Well let's go!" said the dad

"Where?" said Anna

"Town central!" answered the dad

"Well let's go!" said Brittany 

Chapter 7

At Town Central

"So how do you get in the Underground room?" asked Anna 

"Oh you lift the seal like this" said the dad

He lifted it but only Anna could fit because she was flexible.

She opened the door then this happened.

She walked into the Underground room and let out a big scream because Anna saw the awake dead dad was telling her about "Then the monster puts the victims in an Underground room" he would said to me "Now the monster only takes selfish humans who always want their stuff to themselves and they are to selfish to let anyone else have a chance of getting it......" Now she knew that was true because the awake dead people" Who is dead and has their eyes open which is creepy" Anna thought. They have all their belongings with them. Then she saw a shadow with things coming out of it and it is very big and has a big face and then she saw what dad said"Now the monster of the awake dead has a huge eye that he uses to scare people, he also has 12 arms with big angry dogs on them to guard the awake dead." So the dogs start barking and Anna ran as fast as her 12 year old legs will carry me and I slam the door of the Underground room and climb up and out of the secret entrance and to dad.

"Dad! Help! I saw him and my first instinct was to run!"she said crying into her dads arms.

"I will go"said Mary.

"Me too! Me too!"said Brittany.

So the dad lifted it a little more and when they all were in he shut it. Then he lifted it, put a log in the crack jumped in, then took the log out and it slammed shut.

"What did you just do!"shouted Anna to her dad.

"I am going in with you three and that is final! Now we are going in there now OK?"the dad said seriously.

They opened the door....

And they went in and the monster of the living dead immediately turned around and Brittany did not remember to block her eyes and Anna knew as soon as she opened her eyes when the monster of the living dead turned around. Brittany was on the ground, she was one of the awake dead population now.

All Anna could do was stand there, she knew all they could do was pick her up and carry her to Mrs.and Mr.Denver and tell them what happened and ask what they want to do. Then the parents will look into Brittany's eyes to see what the monster did to scare her. Then they would see if they could revive her back in Anna's room.

Chapter 8

At Brittany's House

Anna and Mary asked Anna's dad if they could go by themselves and he said yes. So they walked past Green street lane to Brittany's house called 3279 North street and went to the door with awake dead Brittany and rang the door bell but instead of the usual ding dong there was a loud z noise and when the door opened it stopped. The person who did answer was the mother and she looked as weird as awake dead Brittany. And she saw Brittany and said,"What did you do to my poor Brittany ?!?!"

Mary tilted her head to Brittany's mom Anna knew what she meant by that and she talked first but it was exactly as if she was talking to her dad usually,"Well Brittany saw something called the monster of the awake dead and it scares people to death so-" RING! 

"I have to...."said Brittany's mom.

"Its OK I knew that would happen you will go answer the phone and have to leave us at the doorstep and we will be waiting for you to come back, blah blah blah waiting waiting waiting."said Anna.

"No sweetie I will answer the phone and if I need to leave I will say 'I will call you back when I'm ready' and then when you are done talking I will call them back and leave to were ever I need to go OK sweeties?"said the mom as if they were 4 year olds.

"OK"said Anna and Mary.

She left and 10 minutes later she was back.

"OK now start over please."said the mom as if they were in 2nd grade and she was the teacher.

"OK so Well Brittany saw something called the monster of the awake dead and it scares people to death so she wanted to destroy it so she meet me at 6:00 and we ..."

At every word Anna said Brittany's mom got more and more emotional.

"So then we went to town central and went into were he puts his victims in a place that people call the Underground room and he stared at her and she well"

"It is a good thing you did not finish that because I know what you were going to say and I would have started crying so yeah." the mom started to fade away at the end.

"We were told to tell you to look into her eyes."said Anna who then noticed Mary running to the dad.

"OK." said the Brittany's mom.

They both looked into her eyes and saw a mix of Anna ,Mary, Anna's dad and Brittany's mom sinking in a pitch black quicksand type thing and her not being able to help them. It looked so sad. they jerked there heads away because they were getting woozy.

"Now then what do you want to do with her?"said Anna.

"What do you want to do with her?"said Brittany's mom.

"We want to try and cure her"

"I think that would be best"

"But if it does not work what do you want to do with your daughter?"

"Oh I guess I will cremate her."

"Oh OK bye!" 

"Bye sweetie!"

Chapter 9

Then Back At Anna's House

Anna meet Mary on the window sill sitting there like she owned the place. Mary looked shocked.

"Why did you leave?"said Anna 

"Oh I saw the monster and I ran."said Mary still scared as a bug about to get stepped on.

"Oh. OK Mary I hate that everyone is seeing it but let's start working on reviving Brittany agreed? Besides the sooner we get to trying to find an antidote and the sooner we defeat the monster the sooner this will be over."

"OK"said Mary 

They worked on Brittany for 2 days, no sleep but the farthest they got was one single blink each day. Mary working on the computer, Anna mixing chemicals with goggles and gloves. They also got a heart meter and it when bee...... nonstop. Then two seconds a day it would beep once then bee..... again./ They mixed up all the ingredients that worked and then Beep......Beep.....Beep..... Beep...beep..beep.beep.bee........

"Aw well we tried" said Anna disappointed.

"Wait! said Mary,"I think that we should get your dad to help us." "OK I will go and get my dad to come up here and help us, he is really good at science so that will make him really helpful to so yeah."

She went down stairs to an unusually happy dad and asked,"dad, why are you happy.

"This is why" he said stepping aside to reveal a bottle of chemicals.

"The antidote! oh dad I love you so much! Thank you dad!"

"Now lets pull a prank on Mary so here is the plan we will go up there and I will say there is no use then you look gloomy then we will smile and say 'Let's try the antidote!' and then the rest is a mystery"

"Let's go!"

They went upstairs to the eager Mary looking gloomy ( perfectly following the plan )

The dad said "There is no use"

Mary bowed her head.

They said "Let's try the antidote"

"You made it!"said Mary taking the antidote and analysing it while also recording the ingredients down then going over to Brittany and pouring it in.

Immediately they peered into her eyes and they saw themselves getting released from the black stuff and they got away just in time for Brittany to wake up!

"What happened?"said Brittany.

"Oh you were about to become the awake dead but we saved you!"said Anna.

"Oh Anna how did you do it?!?!?!"

"Ask dad."

Brittany looked at dad and said almost pleading to hear the answer.

"Please tell me!?!?!?"she said it like a two year old.

"OK so I put everything happy into a bottle make it into a chemical and mix it with spiders then I pour it into your mouth and boom. Done!"he said to her.

"Oh could you repeat that so I can give it to the authorities."said a voice from the corner of the room. 

Chapter 10

The Voice From The Corner Of The Room

"DAD!!!!"Mary yelled.

"Yes and I hear by ground you from ever coming here again!"said Mr.Briskley triumphantly to her daughter while pointing to the door.

Mary looked at the floor while muttering swear words under her breath as she walked out of the room.

"And no Denver or Oltdado is allowed in my house ever again. And also I will make sure you never know about this,"he said pointing at the antidote "ever again!" He said smashing all their work to pieces. "And so then you can't make it anymore I will use my new invention,"he said pointing to a pen hung around his neck." to swipe your memories off how you got it FOREVER!!!!" and before Brittany, Anna, or the dad could dodge out of the way they had forgotten about ever making an antidote. Then Mr. Briskley walked out of the room slamming the door behind him.

"So shall we continue trying to stop the monster?"said the dad standing up and sweeping the glass and other rubble into a trash bag. 

"Yes I think we should, do you think we should Anna? Anna?" 

But Anna was not paying attention. "Were is Mary?"

Brittany shrugged.  

"I don't know honey but we should worry about the monster now-"

"No. We need her now with us,"said Anna interrupting her dad and standing up to fast and got a head rush."What do you think Brittany?" 

Anna could tell Brittany was overwhelmed with the decision but she managed to slowly get up and stammer"I-I.....agr-agree with A-Ann-Anna." as she walked over to Anna with a small smile.

"OK now that I am the winner of this little debate we will go to Mary's house now!"

"Wait! Some of my memory is returning! Mr.Briskley will never allow us into his house ever again!"said Brittany.

"I have just the thing!"said the dad

He went under his bed and pulled out something called Camobody pro and pulled out some trash bag clothes.

"What are these things?"said Anna while the dad was putting them on.

"Watch."he said.

He then yelled"MARY'S THERAPIST!"at the top of his lungs. Immediately there was a big tornado of smoke and when it cleared he looked just like Mrs.Pansy, Mary's therapist.

"Your turn."said the dad(or Mrs.Pansy)

"OK"Brittany grabbed one, put it on and yelled "MaryS THEARAPISTS ASSISTANT!" then Mrs.Pansy's assistant Carol appeared in front of Anna.

Then Anna put one on and once again yelled at the top of her lungs "MRS.BRISKLEY!" Then she felt a feeling that was in between a growth spurt and a nauseous feeling and when it stopped she looked down at herself she saw Mrs.Briskley's outfit she was wearing that day.

"I will call the real Mrs. Briskley and tell her not to come home yet."said the dad walking over to the phone and dialing her cellphone number. When he was done they went to 4586 Hufrey Mill Drive.

Chapter 11

At The Briskley House

Ding Dong

"Honey you are home!"said a very happy Mr.Briskley who gave Mrs.Briskley a big fat wet kiss on the lips an said "we shall go to the store and buy a big feast!"

Then he looked at dad (Mrs.Pansy) and Brittany (Carol) and said,"Mary is upstairs." He said walking towards the car and opening the passenger door for Anna(Mrs.Briskley) and she sat down.

"I love you so much so tonight we will have a date!"said Mr. Briskley happily.

"But what about Mary?"Anna said 

"Well we can just send her to bed early."he said simply.

"Ok. What happened while I was gone anyway?"

"Oh well Mary is grounded from going to or seeing Anna or Brittany"

"Why?"

"Because they are putting her in front of a monster that could kill her!" He said with a worried tone. 

"Oh ok I was just wondering that.... So what are you're plans for the date?"

"You will see."he said with a grin.

Then when they were back from riding around they went home and upstairs and opened Mary's door and they stopped there conversation. 

"Mary I have told your mother what you did and she has made a punishment for you."Mr.Briskley.

"what."said Mary knowing what was coming.

"You will go to bed at 6:00"said Mr.Briskley.

"OK I will do that on one condition."said Mary like a grown up

"What is it?"said Anna (Mrs.Briskley)

"If mom comes in here with me alone for one hour before I go to bed."said Mary in a case closed sort of way.

"OK"said Mr.Briskley

"I'll do that"said Mrs.Briskley

"Ok it is 5:00 now so let's start."said Mr.Briskley walking out of the room but before he shut the door,

"NO EAVESDROPPING!"yelled Mary that resembles how loud she had to scream to turn into Mrs.Briskley

He gloomy went downstairs. 

"Now Anna, Mary, Mr.Oltdado," she said to them let's defeat this thing!"

"Huh?" said Anna.

"Oh while you were in the car with my dad they," she said indicating Brittany and Anna's dad "told me everything"

"Yep now we will all go down to Mr.Briskley and we will tell him who we really are!!!"said the dad triumphantly

"Yes definitely, I can't wait to see the look on his face when he knows who he kissed!" Anna said giggling.

"Now I brought my Camobody Pro and it has a set of reverse effect headbands!"

"That is going to be so great because it is uncomfortable talking to my mom about these sort of things" Mary said with a sigh of relive.

The dad pulled out three of the headbands and they all put them on the same time. Anna saw Mrs.Briskley's clothes melt off of her and at the same time a sensation that felt like she was hurdling towards the ground then it ended and she looked down at herself and saw her own body and clothing. Then she looked to her left and saw her dad smiling. Then she looked to her right and saw Brittany who apparently had the same sensation and was looking at herself as if she was making sure she did not look anything like Carol. When she knew she did not, she gave an approving smile to Anna.

"They work!" Brittany said to the dad.

"Well they are tested after all" said the dad with a hint of sarcasm.

"Ok now lets go downstairs and see the look on his face!" Mary said.

Mary went downstairs first and went to Mr.Briskley.

"MOM!" she yelled. Then Anna came downstairs.

"Guess who you kissed" Anna said pointing at herself and laughing. 

Mr.Briskley gave a face that was in the middle of furious and surprise.

"Carol and Mrs. Pansy!" Then the dad and Brittany came down the stairs laughing.

Chapter 12

The Real Mrs.Briskley

Then KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK 

"Who is it?" said Mr.Briskley

"Mrs.Briskley." said Mrs.Briskley

"Come in."said Mr.Briskley

Then she came in and immediately Mr.Briskley yelled," DID YOU KNOW ABOUT THIS!!!!!!!!!"

"Yes" said Mrs.Briskley

"WHAT!!" said Mr.Briskley 

"We called her."said the dad 

" Oh so I...and you were...."then he fainted because his brain needed a break.

"Is he all right??"asked Mary.

"Yes sweetie."said Mrs.Briskley.

" Can we stop the monster of the awake dead?"they asked.

"Yes" said Mrs.Briskley.

"Yay!!!!!" But then Mr.Briskley started to get up!
"You have to have my permission to! How rude to leave me here fainted and run off! I'm disappointed!"
"Can we go Mr. Briskley?" said Anna
"Surely not! Why would I let you put Mary in danger again! Get out of my house!!!"
"Ok" Mary said and she ran with the dad, Anna, and Brittany out of the house.
"Wow that must have took a lot of guys to do that!" said Anna as they were running to the Oltdado house.
"Yeah and I'm totally grounded when I get home!"
They all laughed then went to Anna's room and grabbed there materials and went to town central.

Chapter 13

Going To Town Central Again

They opened the seal but before they opened the door,

"Close your eyes!!!!!"

"Yes sir" they all said to the dad.

Then they went in and started shooting randomly. Then they heard a noise that sounded like a mad grunt. 

Then Brittany walked up to the monster, sheilding her eyes from the monsters big eye and said,"grunt to you to" BANG!!!

"Is it over??" asked Anna.

"Yes it is." said the dad, who was the first to dare look at the monster.

Then everyone saw the awake dead start to wake up and the people started saying things like,

"Wow thanks!" and "Thank God I'm alive!" and "That was so cool!"

"So wanna have some victory nachos?"

"YEEEEEEES!!!!!!!!" Anna, Brittany, Mary

Chapter 14

The last chapter

"MMMMMMMMMM!!!!!!"said Anna
"These are some delicious victory nachos!!"said Brittany
"TOTALLY!!!!"said Mary
"I love that its all over!"said the dad.
They got up and they all said goodbye to each other and Anna went to bed.
'I wonder what might happen if the monster of the awake dead is still alive or had kids...' Anna thought in her head as she fell asleep.
She had a dream that she was in the news as the last known survivor to see the monster of the awake dead. She looked in the background and saw everyone was dead.
"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" she screamed getting out of bed with a start.
"Anna! Are you OK?!" said the dad
"Yeah....I just had a bad dream."
"What was it about?"
"Oh me beating the monster of the awake dead."
"Oh good. Are you OK?"
"Yes"
"OK Come and eat your breakfast."
Anna thought about if the monster of the awake dead had a kid. What she didn't know was that it did happen!!!
THE END